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This work dragged on longer than expected, about 6 hours but I am rather proud of it, though not perfect I would like to think the design is a marked improvement upon previous works, the detail not necessarily so.

I have no idea why I chose to do a fat dragon... that can't fly, I actually think it looks like a cross between a crocodile and a goat (wierd huh?) maybe thats 'cause I've never seen either in the flesh before though.

There are many things I would do differently next time, i.e. I don't like the cluttered wings very much, the head doesn't stand out AS much as I would like, plus I ran out of ideas for textures so the bottom of the legs and arms look mediocre in my opinion.

I am particulary proud of the design and proportions, because I feel it looks very natural and nothing seems to look to big or small, again ignoring the wings which I feel were a mistake. I actually started this drawing with simply the right wing, and then developed a dragon from it, I thought the wing had a lot of potential, boy was I wrong? The rest I am proud of though... and yes, finally I have a proper orignal dragon uploaded to DA, thats all I wanted.

Please coment, complement and suggest areas of improvement :)
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This thing is very crazy just for your information!!! It is very original, unpredictable, random, and epic.
I have critiqued this based on personal preferences and past experiences. . .

I have a feeling that you did not mean to make it fat. The legs seem out of place, and not positioned to hold his "fat" body.
The strongest aspect of this is it's weirdness and randomness.
Arms on the neck, an extra random wing (small).

What I like about it is that it is detailed, and the impact was a total shock. An extremely weird and bizarre dragon monster with random body parts. . .

I hope you find my critique fair.